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1. Cowgirl0334 (Guest) on Chapter 2 Fri 22 Oct 2021 04:42PM UTC

   Hej i really liked what you wrote so far XD looks to be a sweet story.
   One thing i like to maybe point out. When you do your ‘POV changes’ maybe write WHO’S POV we are Reading in.
   I didn’t realise it was Chris until his name was mentioned so i had to reread it all again in his perspective.
   But i still very much enjoyed it <3

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2. 1. AshtrayGirl02 on Chapter 2 Fri 22 Oct 2021 06:58PM UTC

      

      Hey! I’m glad you liked it! I’ll take in consideration the POV thing! Thanks for the comment, have a nice day!!

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