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  1. “That's because Gerard wouldn’t have hurt you. He just needed you out of the way.” I'm trying to give Scott the benefit of the doubt that he truly didn't think that Gerard would hurt Stiles but did he think to check? Perhaps Scott should actually make sure that Stiles was okay? Thank the gods that Stiles has Derek, Jackson and now Lydia to lean on because Scott is being a horrible, uncaring friend.

    Continued lovely work on this fic and I saw a quick nitpick: Scott McCall would suddenly start paying attention to Stiles, his beats friends since the first grade,--should it be "best friend since first grade"?

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    1. Thank you so much for reading and letting me know that I made a mistake. I just changed 'beats' too 'best'. I think that Scott doesn't realize the impact he has on others and i'm really excited to see where it goes.

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