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  1. Shaonics on Chapter 1 Thu 02 Dec 2021 06:00PM UTC

    Ah, well honestly it wasn't totally the Moon thing in the beginning; it was more a worry that it might feel like tease to have them pretend to be boyfriends only for them to act like nothing happens at the end, and your tags only say fake relationship too, if it said something like fake to real relationship that would help too.

    But if they are together, you could significantly alter the the ending to Arc two if you write that far. The scene at Darkstalker's Castle would go way different if Qibli and WInter were boyfriends; mainly cause WInter may be less angry and more willing to listen to Qibli there. TH=he battle of JMA also could be different too; I feel like Winter would not rush of to Join the battle and would stay and listen to Qibli's plan about the empathy spell and the transport spell, meaning WInter would be there when Darkstalker takes Qibli, and it would mean Winter would come with Moon to rescue Qibli. Also, I feel Darkstalker may react significantly different when he talks to his mom is Winter is there and Foeslayer tells him WInter is the one who saved and freed her, at great cost to himself too.

    Though based on what you said, The two will fall in love and become boyfriends, right?
    Before the end to, hopefully, right?

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    1. Glamour_Rock on Chapter 1 Thu 02 Dec 2021 11:57PM UTC

      Oh yes, there'll definitely be shipping between the two of them, it'll take a while but def before the end. All I'm spoiling for now though

      Also I added the fake to real relationship tag just to avoid confusion)

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      1. Shaonics on Chapter 1 Fri 03 Dec 2021 12:00AM UTC

        Ooh, that is awesome to hear then, and I can't wait for the next part.

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