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  1. KyoshiWraith89 (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 21 Dec 2021 09:12AM UTC

    I love your story but I'm worried about your characterization of Merlin, could you make him able to stand up for himself? The jerky behavior towards him is increasingly annoying. He should put them in their place at least once. Can't wait to see how it all comes together

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    1. Clearwater96 on Chapter 1 Tue 21 Dec 2021 11:04AM UTC

      Thanks for the comment! I like that your enjoying my story! And don’t worry. Merlin is gonna have a rough time in the next episode or two worth of chapters as he comes to the harsh realization that Arthur will never love him like he wants in his marriage. Arthur will, of course, fall in love, but it’ll be a process getting there. I’m only on episode two so we still have a ways to go. But if you wanna know, I believe the end of episode four will be when Merlin is just done and he really starts putting Arthur in his place. It’s actually probably what contributes to Arthur starting his slow fall into love and realizes, hey, Merlin could be the one. It’ll be a ride when we get to that point. It still won’t be easy for them afterwards, they’ll have a lot of problems to work out, but they will get there. Anyway, I don’t wanna give away spoilers and actual details, but I hope you keep reading!

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      1. KyoshiWraith89 (Guest) on Chapter 1 Wed 22 Dec 2021 11:24PM UTC

        Thanks for explaining, looking forward to future updates!

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