Comment on Triangles of Jealousy S4 ~ We're Partners Now S5

  1. Lola (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Jan 2022 03:56AM UTC

    Wow that was amazing!!! Too bad you weren't hired as a writer for the series, surely we'd have a fifth season by now. Love how you captured the characters, always ruled by their anger and annoyance with each other, but with an undeniable attraction, just as they are in the series. I hope the story will have more chapters, you could take the final part of chapter 13 when Rio receives the confirmation that Beth finally decides for working with Nick, so he is seen sad in his bar with the bottle of Whisky, but in this case he is not A from there the story could be that Beth stops working directly with Rio (to not see him anymore), so the girls are left to take her place for the money drops (which she protects from her position), Rio misses her and realizes that it was his mistake to push her so hard and that's why he lost her, so he looks for a way to get her back. Nick becomes really interested in Beth in a romantic way, who once officially divorced, starts a real romance with him. Nick treats her as she would expect from a partner, which gives her stability and security in her life.
    Rio is dying of jealousy and regret, she retains her anger towards him for kidnapping her sister, and beyond her attraction,
    she feels that Rio only wants her back for the money and to have her as one of his many women. Another challenge for Rio. I went a little long hahaha, sorry, you are my favorite, thanks for this amazing story.

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    1. IGotTime on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Jan 2022 04:35AM UTC

      Phew I am glad you liked it! You can thank COVID and another lock down giving me time.
      There is more to come. I like writing these two at each other’s throats all the time.

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      1. Lola (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Jan 2022 04:44AM UTC

        I hope you're well! I hate covid! But if you have to thank him for this, I thank him hahaha. The same is your talent, not the covid. These two are a vice, their cat and mouse game got us all! XDD

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        1. IGotTime on Chapter 1 Fri 14 Jan 2022 05:09PM UTC

          Yes I am fine, thanks for asking. It’s our province in a lockdown. So I am enjoying writing which is why my pseudo IGotTime is appropriate.

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