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This was so good! I love the intense way you went into how Megumi made Sukuna feel. He barely touched him and Sukuna was ready to cum. Also the way you set up Sukuna's past experiences with other doms made his encounter with Megumi all the more exciting. It was great. I think my favorite bit was when Sukuna requested to hold Megumi and got denied. Sukuna being told no is just so sexy. He's got such a commanding presence, that it makes it all the more thrilling when he doesn't get what he wants. You really portrayed that well. Btw, there was a small section that looks like it was repeated in error. It's when Megumi tells Sukuna to use him. ♡
I need Sukuna being told no more often I swear! You have no idea how giddy your comment made me and I'm so happy it all came across so well and worked together. You're so right about Sukuna having a commanding presence and it really is a wonderful feeling when he gets denied what he wants. (my bad. thank you. I went ahead and amended it <3 )
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