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1. Piddleyfangs on Chapter 4 Sun 14 Feb 2016 07:26PM UTC

   

   Go for it~

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2. 1. BurstEdge on Chapter 4 Mon 15 Feb 2016 03:11AM UTC

      

      I suggest that you put more dialogue in the sex scenes. Not too much to ask, I hope.

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   2. 1. Piddleyfangs on Chapter 4 Mon 15 Feb 2016 03:50AM UTC

         

         I suppose I could aim for that? I'll keep it on board as I work. Just dialogue like "Harder"? "Oooh yes"

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      2. 1. BurstEdge on Chapter 4 Mon 15 Feb 2016 05:57AM UTC

            

            Yes, that's what I'm hoping for.

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