While each different person speaking goes on a different paragraph. The same person speaking should also be on the same paragraph. You don't have to separate every single time someone speaks up from a paragraph. In many cases I had to pause to figure out if this was another person speaking or the same one. While this way of people speaking is okay every now and then, it can be confusing to some people if always done like that. And talking doesn't always have to be at the front of a paragraph, can be in the middle or even the end. Can help with the flow of reading.
I appreciate you looking into my writing and giving me pointers. Could you tell me which chapter I do this? Is it just the first or all the chapters so far?
I think the chapters so far. Though just keep writing and apply that if you want to use it. If you want to edit the earlier chapters, better to just wait until after you finished.
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