"So a half-orc can pass as a half-elf? I guess they do both sometimes have pointy ears." I was reading through the manual, and it mentioned that a half-orc with more human features can pass as human, and there was overlap in the skin tones and eye colors between half-orcs and half-elves. Between that and people seeing what they expect...as long as she keeps her teeth hidden, people see elf because they don't expect civilized orc.
"This is a funny twist on the in-game scene, and further expands on the contrast between Clarisse Vorak and Virgil." I couldn't let him get away; in a real setting, they'd be following him down the mountain path, he wouldn't be able to just vanish.
"I like how you've split up the in game dialogue into multiple conversations; it works better for a story." Ohmygosh there's so much good stuff in that dialogue file I wanted to use, I had to split it up.
"I like this dialogue. It's not in-game, is it?" It's in the dialogue file! You should hear the sound clip for it, Virgil sounds 5000% done with the whole prophesy nonsense. XD
When you get to Shrouded Hills, I want you to know that I took some of the 'you told Virgil to wait and now you're taking him back' dialogue bits and worked them in. See if you can spot them! And I am loving your long, detailed comments. My week has been made, and it just started. :)
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Ryxl on Chapter 1 Mon 16 Dec 2013 09:59PM UTC
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