He should have take a note from the Trinety Killer in Dexter (the tv show version, not the books) and just taken a break now and then, and maybe moved around for it.
If he has a problem with corrupt politicians, britain isn't the only country who has that I'm sure. Lol
Anyway...
It was a fairly good story. A bit lacking in obstacles to overcome and other conflicts, but it was very....fine.
Not great. But not bad. Somewhere in the middle, so...
Keep practising. You have the potential to be a great writer. ^_^
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