I don't think my writing has ever been described as hyperbolic before, but I am a nerd and sometimes a math nerd and that makes me so happy!
It is, actually, but he neatly slips through a legal loophole there. The more worrying charge is the one he can't find a loophole to wriggle out of . . .
"the two of you were the only people to ever face them in single combat and survive. Everyone else is disqualified on grounds of not good enough." " I'm going to need therapy. Lots of therapy. All the therapy. It was just one bad thing after another, for twenty-four years"
Rereading chapter 1 again, I realized hyperbole isn't what Anakin was really doing, just being blunt and not really playing things up for emotion. But lines like "all the x" are just such modern internet parlance, that at least for me all together the language kind of gave the work a very energized tone. I might not be making sense, i haven't taken a writing analysis class in a long time.
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