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1. Coco_c on Chapter 1 Fri 25 Mar 2016 06:36PM UTC

   

   Hi! I told you, you can take me to this ride and I'll be prepared with chocolates and a safety blanket, for the tears to come. Writing a mature story and knowing you want to develop something relatable and real is really hard and I believe you'll make a great job. So far we've a promising prologue and nice and clean narrative with a pinch of misogyny, a woman who wants more, a child trying to be brave, a father in pain... and -sadly- a typical mother. I really want to read more. =)

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2. 1. minxiebutt on Chapter 1 Sat 26 Mar 2016 11:26PM UTC

      

      Thank you Coco. Your words are encouraging me so much with this project :) Lots more misogyny to come!

      Last Edited Sat 26 Mar 2016 11:27PM UTC

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