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  1. AlEvans26 on Chapter 3 Wed 07 Sep 2022 10:17PM UTC

    I have to thank Heavenly Pearl for encouraging me to give Asteri her name. Originally she was a nameless 'bodyguard' which drew more attention to her and therefor eunderminned the reveal I wanted at the end.

    Thank you for the kind words. This fic, specifically this chapter, is very special to me.

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    1. IwrestledaVongonce on Chapter 3 Thu 08 Sep 2022 06:51AM UTC

      Alone the work you put in giving her her name is so worthy of praise!

      One could tell on how fantastic it was told!

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