Comment on The Strength and The Sight (CURRENTLY BEING REWRITTEN- SEE CHP.28)

  1. Inkwell_Intrigues on Chapter 12 Tue 20 Sep 2022 09:42PM UTC

    Thank god. xD
    I swear half the time I'm banging my head against the wall trying to come up with a good idea, lol.

    Thank you for the notes on what worked well! I'll definitely be trying to emulate/repeat what went well in future chapters as well as make em a little longer. My current theory is that the longer I keep you readers reading, it lends me more time to build up and make things feel more emotionally impactful. (within reason lmao, I ain't writing a 10k word chapter. No one wants that. At least I don't think so)

    I'm so glad you connect with Mugman! He's my favorite! <3
    I do work to make sure all the others get their fair share of 'screen time', but he's my personal favorite.
    I was the younger sibling always being dragged around by the bombastic older one, so I based a lot of Mugsy's personality on who I was/how I acted as a kid. I'm super glad it works out well!

    Thank you so much for reading!!! Your work/comments always make my day! <3

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