Entertaining, I don't usually get to catch the very beginning of a good fic upon initial release but I like the tone. Its very teenager-esque. Your work design is fine, don't feel self conscience about that, we don't all have alpha, beta and omega editors/readers at the ready for editing help.
You’re interactions are natural and easy to follow, you did a good job! I like the way your character interacts with its surroundings. Even with intellectual and emotional stunts due to your characters age, you have a clear idea of what you want to do character wise and it shows.
If you want an alpha reader hmu I’m open for tasks.
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OcEaNsKy19 on Chapter 1 Tue 11 Oct 2022 06:20PM UTC
Last Edited Tue 11 Oct 2022 06:21PM UTC
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