WOW okay so i didn’t get the notification for the 2nd chapter but WOW you really never disappoint!!
i love how you portray scara as very inhumane, childish (?) and somewhat incapable to grasp human emotions. him taking the mole really helps show that. it’s pretty different from your last fic and i’m just astounded you can do different dynamics so well!!
THE HIDE AND SEEK was SO good! i got caught up in the moment with your descriptions and it really felt like i was there!! the classic ‘dark spin on childhood games’ thing is something that never gets old. and childe? PERFECTT!!!!!
your chapters are just getting better and better! another great thing (your fics are still great without this, don’t pressure yourself to upload more!) is how frequent the chapters are!! i love this fic sm! sorry for the long comment!
I love exploring and writing Scaramouche about especially his more inhumane side. The way he wouldn’t be able to grasp or understand a lot of seemingly normal concepts to us like how our bodies don’t heal as fast or the various marks we have. I’ve seen a lot of fics highlight how cruel and remorseless he is (canon based and AU wise), putting a lot of emphasis on it in his dialogue. But I don’t think I’ve really seen any explore his inhumaness and idk but to me it’s the most fascinating thing to explore about him since there’s a lot of routes to go with it.
Thank you thank you! I loved writing it, since I’m a big horror fan lol. And childe!! Thank you! He’ll probably be popping up more in future chapters.
Ahhhh it means a lot that you’ve been keep up with it all! Ive been reading other fics and literature to get better with my writing hence why it’s hopefully getting better and detailed. Writing wise, I’ve just been really inspired a lot and I’m having fun, hence the frequent updates. Anyway, thank you for all the support it means a lot! <333
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