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1. thinknicht on Chapter 8 Sat 14 Jan 2023 08:47PM UTC

   

   Maybe I should change the synopsis. Sigh… summaries are hard to write. What would you say captured your attention the most out of it?

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2. 1. green_tea43 on Chapter 8 Tue 17 Jan 2023 01:41AM UTC

      

      Hmmm....I think the synopsis will probably be fine if you leave it as is. After all, I (and plenty others) still clicked on it, haha. I suppose what stood out to me the most was the second half, where you started hinting about Sakura's future darkness, feats, skills, etc, which sounded intriguing to me. I was a little confused about where in the timeline we exactly were, from just reading the synopsis, though - I didn't realize we were starting right from when Sakura was still like...13 or however old. Well, anyway, that's just what I think. Thanks for replying & good luck writing! :)

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   2. 1. thinknicht on Chapter 8 Wed 18 Jan 2023 08:49PM UTC

         

         I changed it the slightest bit, thanks for the help!

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