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  1. Grimmouche on Chapter 1 Tue 21 Mar 2023 09:56PM UTC

    ~~I took Mr Collins and made him hot. I will not justify my actions. ~~
    Do you mean to tell me this is sort of technically a Mister Bennet/Mister Collins romance? *stares suspiciously*

    Hi!

    ~~‘Which he wouldn’t be if you were married with heirs of your own,’ Anathema suggested snidely.
    ‘Oh, please, who would marry him?’ Pepper said.
    Crowley nodded furiously.~~
    Hehehehehe, I love the two sisters.

    ~~He made a rather poor show of controlling his own excitement at the prospect of Mr Fell’s visit as he spent the rest of the morning pacing about the house, shouting in turn at the dog, the stable boy, and the candlestick in his study.~~
    Ooof course. I can so imagine Crowley urging everyone to stay calm then suffocating in a corner.
    (Pepper and Anathema are practising swordfighting and tarrot reading in the drawing room btw)

    ~~Pepper pulled Crowley out of his study and into the drawing room, where she shoved him into the armchair by the fire, while Anathema took position at the pianoforte and Pepper arranged herself on the sofa with a novel.~~
    That’s my favorite P&P scene hehehehe thanks

    ~~But I am grateful to be under the patronage of Lady Agnes de Nutter, whose neverending generosity and wisdom enrich my life in every possible way.’~~
    Oh this entire dialog had me WHEEZING, he does have that sort of eagerness and devotion that brings Mr Collins to mind doesn’t he?

    ~~‘I do,’ Crowley implored, stepping closer. ‘I remember very well, indeed.’~~
    implored Gods this is killing me, way to up the tension in the room! "He’d made quite the impression” indeed!

    KISS KISS KISS KISS YES

    Feral you deed it again, I’m hooked. Can’t wait to read those two idiots fooling around in fake-Longbourn and being atrociously obvious about it. No one will be fooled I tell you. Cheers!

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    1. FeralTuxedo on Chapter 1 Thu 30 Mar 2023 01:47PM UTC

      omg, this comment made me laugh so much, thank you! Yes, I suppose Crowley is the Mr bennet of this fic. Make of that what you will. I love the idea of the sisters swordfighting in the drawing room while Crowley is fretting about the visit. He probably wouldn't even notice. Aziraphale is definitely not your typical Mr Collins, as Crowley soon found out. Thank you so much for your comment, I hope you enjoy the rest of this as well!

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