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  1. LauraScofield on Chapter 1 Wed 03 May 2023 09:58PM UTC

    Oh god I can't believe Eren stayed with Reiner another whole year. Break up with that psycho please! But it looks like he's hopefully starting to see sense. It's interesting you picked Reiner for Eren's problematic boyfriend. While I like the guy's character in canon, I love seeing different versions of characters in fanfics. And he really fits the jealous, overly possessive boyfriend roll here! (Also I lol'ed at the Bert mention. Is he getting some Colossal Titan on the side? 👀)

    I always love your narrative devices - framing this, chapter in a flashback scene was a great choice! Armin and Hange’s friendship is actually something that's underutilised in fanfics. I loved how crazy Hange was here too 😂

    I can't wait to see how Eren and Levi get together! This is the start of another epic Ereri story, and I'm hooked on your words already 😍

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    1. Legendanny on Chapter 1 Thu 04 May 2023 06:08AM UTC

      Yes, sometimes you need a trigger to finally realize what is good for you, or in this case, who is not good for you. You'll see what I mean in the next chapter ;)
      I started to like Reiner in S4, before that I didn't like him. Maybe that's why I chose him 😅 Also, I wanted the image of this muscular, tall person next to Eren, who is the exact opposite of Levi 😊

      Thanks, I'm glad you liked this! I liked flashbacks, but I think it's important to keep the balance and not jump between times too often.

      I really picture Armin and Hange as nerd friends🤣 They can talk about books, science and things their other friends don't understand lol I'm glad you liked them as friends too.

      Thanks so much, I'm always happy when you like my writing 😍❤️❤️

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