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  1. Jasontodd908 on Chapter 7 Wed 07 Jun 2023 03:34AM UTC

    Well I think that wad the point. Bruce doesn't ALLOW him to do it because if he did he'd have to discuss how broken he is too. He can't handle these feelings and Jason talking to him about them is something that he can't deal with.

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    1. Blusup (Guest) on Chapter 7 Wed 07 Jun 2023 09:38AM UTC

      I get what you were trying to do now, I didn't look at it that way. Well great chapter didn't have any problems other than that, thanks for explaining.

      One last thing, about the raven body paint part, you do know 4 or 5 foot radius means the entire body (especially for women who are mostly in the 5' range) I think you meant to say inches, might want to change that part.

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      1. Jasontodd908 on Chapter 7 Wed 07 Jun 2023 10:18AM UTC

        Thanks for catching that. I changed it

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        1. Blusup (Guest) on Chapter 7 Wed 07 Jun 2023 10:47AM UTC

          Yeah it was bothering me when I first read it, didn't point it out because I thought that would be mean, heh

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