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  1. . But Raven found that the more unsettling something was, the more she felt at home
    IT BETTER BE QUEEN BECAUSE THAT’S THE HOME OF YOUR GROOM-TO-BE BABY!!!! (But also like Gotham must absolutely be demon paradise for real. No wonder Trigon chose the gotham branch of the church of blood to settle with)

    “Hi,” She waved shyly at Damian Wayne.
    “Hey,” Something close to a smirk fluttered across his features. It was a small gesture, yet it thawed the icy chill of the Gotham atmosphere
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    “Have you eaten enough today?” Damian asked.

    Our boy making his middle eastern heritage proud I seeee… Talia would be so proud.

    -Quinn blew up another ACE Chemicals location to mock Joker-
    Author you really hd this all set up since the beginning huh?

    -Everyone knew everyone...-
    Another Call back (hint? Call - forward?) to that one comment Luthor made about everyone in gotham being fucking neighbors or something. Like for real AUTHOR UR WRITING IS INSANE (but also like- dc universe IS batman centric so….) On another note – Arella being a gothamite orphan and then hooking up with the devil (Damirae is just really parallels upon parallels huh)

    -but father believes it has merit for some reason.-
    Your really had us this entire time with the whole dubious narrator/characters don’t know everything HUH???’?’?!’’1 Had me fooled that the reason Bruce believed Barry was because of trust-in-his-comrades+paranoia, never for one second because he also had his memories already.

    -“It's not, normally. But I find myself constantly mystified when I'm with you.” She admitted.
    The Batmobile fell to silence, but the adrenaline seemed to reassert itself.-
    THE WAY THEY FLIRT – THEY ARE GONNA BE THE END OF ME!!!!!

    It meant nothing, why was it such a big deal? It wasn't supposed to be.
    THEY ARE SOOO CUTE. ON GOD .

    Wow, you grew out your hair!
    Important bit to know for reference

    -“There are things that I miss,” Raven confessed, once again knitting her fingers together.---
    YES GIRLLL THOSE PEOPLE ARE UR HOMEEEEEE

    -“No matter what decision you make, I’ll respect it.”
    “I know...but I like hearing your take on things sometimes. You’re observant and blunt, Damian. That makes your opinion valuable.”
    “Now you’re sparing my feelings.” That wisp of a smile flashed across his face. “But...I do miss—”-

    Can I just say I LOVE the way you write dialogue between these two. It’s insane how well you write them.

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