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  1. dejaboooo on Chapter 2 Thu 22 Jun 2023 07:08PM UTC

    WOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FINALLY!!!!!!! Ok that aside lol, loved the segments with Haida. Him being yelled at by Sakiyo and going into a spiral was amazing to see, even if I did feel bad for him. Also, FINALLY THE THING I WAS SCREAMING ABOUT JIRO ADMITTED HE LOVES YUKI LETS GOOOOOO!!!!! God that took a long time but I was enjoying the entire time that it took for it to happen lol

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    1. orphan_account on Chapter 2 Thu 22 Jun 2023 08:46PM UTC

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      I just let Sakiyo go to town with her rant about Haida, and let me tell you, the intended effect was for the readers to feel absolutely shitty for Haida.

      Even though it quite literally only took 3 days for Jiro to go from loathing his existence and feelings for Yuki to embracing it, call him an emotional breakdown speedrunner if you would, I was giggling manically during the whole process of him making excuses and denials in his head until to the point where Haida was finally able to have Jiro accept himself by figuratively slapping him on the cheeks and telling him 'you're not insane bro, go get your boyfriend'. Ah, my favourite pastime of making characters go through life-changing and brutal life experiences in the expense of our fun!

      Alas, it seems like the slowburn between Yuki and Jiro is finally coming to it's finale... which means that 1/3 of the romantic tags in the relationships are now fulfilled, and I do think I'm going to have some fun for the two next characters that are going to end up together in the coming chapters...

      Also merci beaucoup for being able to keep up with the story, as much as it's progressively getting longer and longer! <3

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