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  1. The Isle depletes magic; eats it from people like a parasite, and uses it to strengthen the barrier. It's a self-sufficient beast of a spell, and one that Maleficent chafes under every day she breathes.

    I love this. The self-sufficient beast of a spell makes the barrier feel enormous in a way that I don’t think I’ve felt so clearly in a fic before. Your wording is just gorgeous!

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