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  1. Tavi with Water Flower

    I love it when the shorter, smaller, fragile-er, of course you're on bottom get to top.

    The temperature play was great and helped ground the characters into their world. This wasn't just any 2 people, it was Mitsuba and Kou. I'm only going y the anime and bits of the Manga but I thought the characterization was spot on.

    And really, with how many times he's mentioned porn, in canon, Mitsuba should have some idea of how this works. Kou's certainly not complaining! 😁😎💖

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    1. I’ve wanted to incorporate temperature but I always forget in most fics and this one was prefect to do it with! I’m glad someone really enjoyed that aspect! I try to capture their personalities too, I really do so I’m glad you also think they’re spot on 🥲 And yes, Mitsuba would definitely know quite a few things, much to Kou’s pleasure 🤭

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