BROGLEEEE oh this is so awesome mich!!! divine tree arc horror is so fun, so claustrophobic, and you nailed that feeling! MAN the reveal about mob - this sets up such an interesting au, such a horrifying glimpse into one, amazing work :DD i also love how you write shou overall - his mind really does go a mile a minute, he's hyperactive, yeah, but really smart, too. and the descriptions of how the city's been destroyed - the focus on the lack of power around, the lack of cable, etc, was especially stomach churning to imagine. LOVED this! awesome birthday present for cal!
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