Ooh, Gazelle called the Doctor "Theta", as in Theta Sigma, his nickname at the Academy. I love that she is concerned about the Doctor's destination choice and Rose's reaction. I like that Gazelle hates that the rich of the galaxy are watching the death of a planet for fun. I love how considerate she is of Rose's feelings about watching her planet die. While I have to roll my eyes at Rose's reaction to meeting aliens, I am on her side about wanting to know more about the people who invited her to travel with them. I get that they are grieving and feel guilty about supposedly killing their people. The Doctor and Gazelle seem to protest too much about their relationship status. I like that you gave the money line to Gazelle. Oh, Jabe is going to live? I like that. So, is "Remii" a shortened form of Gazelle's name like "Romana" is short for Romanadvoratrelundar? I'm glad that Remii/Gazelle is okay, but it's not like I thought you were going to kill her/make her regenerate in the second chapter of the first story of her series. Finally, they tell Rose about themselves. I love that Gazelle is smart enough to keep money on her. I'm enjoying this story. Hoping to get in another chapter before work.
Yes, I aimed for making Gazelle more considerate then the Doctor. Yep, I spared Jabe here. In this series, I tend to spare at least one person who the Doctor couldn't save once per story. No, Remii is Gazelle's actual given name. No, she won't be regenerating for quite a while yet!
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