Ah, so this may be tmi but what the heck. The day I started reading this story was the day before my biopsy results were due ( spoiler I am cancer free, I just have small tumor, nothing serious) but, this ff helped me be distracted. I can't begin to describe how much I love love this ff!!
And now when the great weight is lifted of my shoulder I will read this again ( the fist night I read until 20-th chapter) but this time I will re-read the first chapters plus continue the story and this time I am in head space to write my impressions ;)
OK Can I just LOVE how you shows us even in first chapter instead of telling us. I seriously love that. From the beginning we see Ozzie is charming and I just love how he greeted his factory worker. Like wow, if that was my boss, I would be over the Moon xD
Like that overlord from Pride who didn't hear the shot.
Oh, I just got this reference!!
The audacity of Mammon of summoning Ozzie in his own ring and factory xD Ahhm Ozzie is calling the shots in Lust, Mammon xd I like how Mammon also wanted to not pay the debt xd
AH, I love the characterization btw, they are so IN CHARACTER, and I especially like Fizz ( probably because he's my favourite)
Once again thank you so much for writing this, sorry for any grammar mistakes ( not native speaker here) and sorry for your inbox because I plan to write review in every chapter, haha!
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Ame545 on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Dec 2023 03:44PM UTC
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