Oh this is *delicious.* Your characterization is on point and I am eating up all of this with a spoon, holy shit. I can’t wait to see how the rest of it plays out, but I had to leave a comment before moving on—this is all so *good!* I especially appreciate how realistic Jim’s jealousy is; he’s clearly trying to get ahold of it, and it’s clearly uncharted territory for him, in this particular area. SO excited to see how everything develops!
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benedick on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Dec 2023 05:15PM UTC
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