Comment on The Colour of Blackberries

  1. HangryLei on Chapter 14 Wed 06 Dec 2023 03:54PM UTC

    "Fíli and Kíli loudly protested that Briar wouldn’t have the energy to speak with them anymore, and Thorin—who watched her clumsy movements with apparent disinterest—simply turned away."

    Apparently disinterest? Briar honey, no. There should be a tag for "Unreliable POV" just for that lol.

    And Thorin...sweetie...TAKE A HINT. TAKE THE MULTIPLE HINTS. THEY'RE DROPPING LIKE RAINDROPS IN A STORM BUT YOU'RE ACTING LIKE YOU'RE WATERPROOF. And idk what I was trying to say there but I hope y'all got it.

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