Oh my god, you succeeded in your goal, because as I was reading this, one thought kept appearing over and over again in my head. “This is perfect, I love this, it’s so perfect.” And it is! The characterization is great here! Usually, I when I read things, I read them while hearing my own voice, but I swear it felt like ProZD himself was narrating.
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I_rEaD_dA_FaNfICsss on Chapter 1 Fri 15 Dec 2023 04:04AM UTC
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