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  1. meandering_bluebottle on Chapter 6 Sat 23 Dec 2023 12:55PM UTC

    I love a great storyline but I also love a great romance side plot and bt God does this chapter deliver on that! What a cliffhanger and let-down for Jane and the audience lol. Love how you're building the tension and angst between Jester and Jane. Her comment about 'maybe this time he will finally bridge the gap and kiss her' made me so curious about any other time she had thought this a possibility.

    I still really enjoy Meri as a character, she seems nice and genuine and I really hope she can remain that way even if at some stage she gets a jilted lover storyline.

    Loved hearing the snippets from Jane and Jester meeting, and the brief timeline of the other staff starting at the castle.

    Can't wait to see what happens when they finally make the festival.

    Merry Christmas and thank you for the chapter.

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    1. batll0 on Chapter 6 Sat 23 Dec 2023 03:16PM UTC

      I absolutely live for your comments, thank you <3 and Merry Christmas!!

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