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  1. Thank you, dear friend! I am glad you enjoyed this story, it did give me some trouble.

    But I think what I liked a lot in the novel was that Zhao Yunlan is, in a way, an upgrade to Kunlun, because while he does have the powers in the end, ZYL is very human, and is very skilled at human interaction, being a human himself. Shen San technically could love SW better than Kunlun, but ZYL can not only love him, he can even *be* with him, to build a relationship and not a doomed romance.

    And when they meet, SW already knows how to perform acts of love and devotion, but doesn't know how to accept them just yet, even though he wants to - that's what I build this story on.

    Thank you for reading and for the kind words! ❤️

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