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  1. harrriton on Chapter 2 Tue 02 Jan 2024 09:13AM UTC

    okeу hi!!!
    I apologize for not writing anything when first chapter came out - I had a brutal day at uni; I read the chapter and hung there for half an hour with my head completely empty; like 'damn that's SO NICE SO GOOD I literally don't know what to say'
    and now I read second chapter and
    MY GOD
    M Y G O D ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
    that's insane
    first of all I'm glad what mia still alive (like of course a blow to head with a heavy object is serious and will have consequences on a person’s health BUT she's alive??? Amazing!!!)
    second of all - I can't even put into words how GLAD I am that you view White as a very serious danger. like, I have a feeling that people don’t take the scale of his actions and how many lives he ruined seriously. besides - phoenix. this boy has not had a vacation since the 4th grade of primary school; Dear God, he needs a day off.
    I haven’t looked forward to the New Year as much as I look forward to the release of each chapter of your series. I absolutely love the way you write!!!!!

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    1. Kitisonfire on Chapter 2 Tue 02 Jan 2024 04:35PM UTC

      Hiyo!! o/
      No worries, life gets in the way sometimes and uni can be a pain. I'm always so grateful when people take the time to share their thoughts, but better not to force it! I'm just glad you liked it :)
      Yeeeea we got Mia :D I kept trying to make it sort of ambiguous to keep people on their toes but she's stuck in it for the long haul and it's awesome writing her (especially later when we get to the Lana stuff)
      YES, THANK YOU, White's actually terrifying??? I think cuz he's such an early character + easy to take down compared to other main villains of the series, he gets written off too easily, but I'd be more scared of him than Von Karma. Von Karma would have you on a platter in court, but White will ruin everything outside of it (and probably laugh at you while he does it)
      Yeah, Phoenix has... issues. Understandably. I swear I have some nice things planned for him.
      Aaaahhhhh thank you!!! (I keep saying that and I will keep on saying that and you will have to deal with that) and Happy New Year all the same :)

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