The talk of holidays, the wholesomeness of this chapter are really impressive and good. The way you write these characters is on point as ever, I can really tell your passion for this couple in your writing and how much you enjoy writing them as well. I liked the banter a great deal especially the part where they are talking about the holidays. I enjoyed the reading a great deal. Thank you for the chance to read it ^_^
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