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  1. Reader (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Feb 2024 09:17AM UTC

    YESSSS FLUFF!!! Irl stuff have been happening and your fic cheered me up a lot, so thank you:)

    I'm glad Sun finally got loved on, he deserves it! It was funny how nervous he was (understandable tho) while others were absolutely smitten from the get go. Especially Eclipse, like dude, you've just met the guy from another universe and you're instantly trying to get into his pants?? Chill out a little lol

    Killcodes family dynamics are my jam, honestly, evil or not they're so entertaining to watch. Bloodmoon are always that annoying young siblings Eclipse never wanted and Killcode's an overworked dad who has to keep up with their bullshit. I wonder who handles the kids in that universe for the most part... KC is security (+ he's scary), so Eclipse? Twins probably help but I don't think they're great at it, they seem to be kinda childish themselves and a bit careless, Eclipse will have to constantly keep watch to make sure they won't play too rough or rile kids up too much. So basically Eclipse has to handle the whole daycare + his unhinged brothers, poor dude, I kinda see why he wants to keep Sun here, aside from the obvious attraction heh:)

    Smut was sooo good, idk how you managed to balance all the characters so no one feels left out, but them working together on obliterating Sun was so satisfying to watch. Though if it wasn't for KC it'll definitely be a lot less peaceful, Bloodmoon and Eclipse are baaaad at sharing XD And biggest YES to pet names and praises!! I was screaming to myself, it was so sweet and exactly what Sun needed especially since it was his first time:) They were so gentle with him 🥺 Sun's gonna have four overprotective boyfriends now and Moon will be confused as hell but with how much bullshit they have to deal with on regular basis it'll come in handy.
    I feel a little bad for Sun since he got pulled out so suddenly, but at least it wasn't in the middle of sex, imagine him getting teased and then he vanishes before cumming😂 Hopefully there could be aftercare next time...

    Btw it was interesting to see parallels with "Three's a crowd"! I wonder how evil versions would react to their counterparts flirting shamelessly with Sunny🤔 I bet Eclipse will be pissed that Sun dares to genuinely like another Eclipse ahaha

    Now I know you're working on multiple wips rn so no pressure but I'll be glad to see more of this au at some point, it was a wonderful read❤️

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    1. Anonymous Creator on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Feb 2024 10:06PM UTC

      Thank you for commenting! I'm glad my story can help you feel better!
      They all fell for Sun almost immediately lol and Sun just kept being nervous and stuttering and they all just fell harder and harder XD
      Eclipse has no patience. He wanted a piece of Sun and he wasn't going to wait around to get it! I's say in this universe Eclipse is the head of the daycare, with Bloodmoon twins helping out (as much as they can without making more problems) while KC basically watches over them all, the kids for security reasons and his own "kids" to keep them from fighting lol
      I can see the children loving the Bloodmoon twins' energy, but of course they also need Eclipse to keep things on track according to the schedules, and probably to keep Bloodmoon from launching kids into the air.
      This Eclipse would be in total heaven if Sun was able to live with them lol he gets a cute new boyfriend who is also great with kids XD
      I imagine they all have lots of family squabbles, but when it came to Sun they quickly learned how to work as a team (though you're right, without KC it would've just been another fight) also Sun has such a thing for praise and cute petnames, he didn't know it before but he sure does now! lol
      I felt so bad for having Sun return home right before he could get cleaned up and cuddled, but you're right that it could've been worse. Imagine him teleporting right in the middle of the fic. No one would have been happy XD I eventually will work on a sequel to this, and when I do you can bet there WILL be aftercare!
      I love the idea of Sun and his four boyfriends lol they would work together (with Moon) to obliterate all of Sun's enemies. Moon would be confused and weirded out but he'd gladly accept the help. And I'm glad you noticed the parallels! I didn't want it to be the same, but I did leave a few little callbacks. I feel like the ones from that fic would be confused as to why these other versions wanna be NICE to Sun? To them he's just an amusing plaything. The two Eclipse's would definitely fight to the death over Sun, one to "own" him, the other to be his loving boyfriend. I'm sure we both know which one Sun would be cheering for.

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