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1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Sun 18 Feb 2024 11:54PM UTC

   SCREAMMMINGNGNGNGNGNGNG THIS IS SO GOOD LITERALLY GOBBBLED IT UPPP

   LOVE THAT I CAN TELL BOOMBOX IS SAYORI, SUBSPACE IS NATSUKI, MEDKIT IS YURI AND BANHAMMER IS MONIKA

   AND THE REFERENCE THAT THE BOOK THAT ERHHH MEDKIT IS READING IS STRAIGHT UP HIS LORE

   also minor typo error : " something something somethign any of the books at your place " ' she ' teased which im assuming is supposed to be ' i '

   anyw keep it up !!! can't wait

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2. 1. ClockworkA on Chapter 1 Mon 19 Feb 2024 12:07AM UTC

      

      Man I cannot catch those typos, I'm super used to writing in 3rd person :(((

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   2. 1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Mon 19 Feb 2024 10:49AM UTC

         issok it wasn't that bad of a typo LOL dw abt it

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