That's so kind of you to say! I also get turned off a story when the writing isn't quite right, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!
I did briefly have another scene in here with the gang doing a silly archery competition, and Jane was teaching Jester in close proximity...which obviously Gunther had plenty to say about. It didn't really fit, seeing as this night has gone on for 3 chapters already - but if I can't sneak it in elsewhere, I'll maybe publish that as its own little oneshot.
As always, your comments mean so much and I love getting them, so thank you!!
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batll0 on Chapter 7 Fri 01 Mar 2024 01:55PM UTC
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