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  1. Nevermore101 on Chapter 1 Wed 06 Mar 2024 07:53PM UTC

    Hello!!! 😀
    I’m looking forward to see how your story unfolds.
    One critique, your writing style seems a bit wordy. Good point, reading it makes me feel smart and your story unique cuz no one does that. Down side, you can turn off a lot of people that way.
    Good luck 👍

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