Comment on You Should Have Changed Course Long Ago

  1. May_Shepard on Chapter 1 Wed 07 Sep 2016 01:50PM UTC

    Oh my Goddddddddd true facts: I made the (glorious) mistake of starting this at home before driving my partner to work, and now I'm sitting in the parking lot devouring chapter 1 and with full plans to dive straight into chapter two--

    YOU HAD ME AT STOP FUCKING HIM AROUND

    Ahem.

    Okay so we know the real problem is them, right? In canon, I mean. Not the external circumstance or the villain of the week or what have you. What you've done in this first chapter is distill the essence of them, of the so-close-yet-worlds-away-ness of them, and you've forged it into a conflict so sharp it hurts. Ahhhhh so good!

    I mean, starting with I love you as the PROBLEM--just, genius!

    *slams kudos button repeatedly*

    Looking forward to more!

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    1. msdisdain on Chapter 1 Wed 07 Sep 2016 04:41PM UTC

      OMG THANK YOU. It was easy to imagine Lestrade getting to a place of WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK IS THE PROBLEM NOW, JOHN?

      The problem is them. The joy is them. The tragedy is them. EVERYTHING IS THEM. This is what keeps us repeatedly banging our heads on the table...

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      1. IamJohnLocked4life on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Sep 2016 07:18PM UTC

        Durararalock art by atharple

        Yes to all of this

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