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  1. HoneyTears93 on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Mar 2024 02:41AM UTC

    I love how clear your writing style is, it flows so well! I confess RadioApple is not my fave ship (TBH it's almost a NOTP) but I was curious when I saw the fanart for chapter 3 and my God is your fic convincing me hahaha!

    I like how super in character Alastor feels here, including how you portray his aroace-ness. I'm a demisexual/demiromantic so I can understand a bit of his thought processes so I absolutely love how creative you are in excluding carnal lust and sexual attraction in sex; it's somewhat hard to capture that nuance but you completely did!

    Alastor fucked around (literally and figuratively) so I can't wait for him to find out. It will be positively delicious.

    Thank you for sharing!!

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    1. Syaunei on Chapter 1 Thu 21 Mar 2024 07:36AM UTC

      Aw, thank you very much!

      You know you're doing something right as an author when the NOTP crowd gets intrigued, haha.

      I'm also demi, so it's a bit easier to get into his head, I am so happy everything I wanted comes across so clearly!

      Oh yes, he will find out in the next chapter, hehe.

      Thank you so much for giving this story a chance! :)

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