i wish you could leave more kudos!!! hahahaha. and thank you!! again with describing the room its largely to point out how shes not really used to the lavishness of it all. and then the servants, shes so uncomfortable like omg, no you guys dont have to do this.... except wait its your job and i want you to get paid... but theres this sense of guilt, you know? like she still feels like shes one of them and doesnt ever want to think herself above her kin
More of that city elf perspective that is so unique. I like the way you're going with this. Kallian seems so grounded. Like she's not gonna change just bc shes the HoF. She's not suddenly above her people. She also seems quite loyal to elves? Yes, he's an older man so Zev might more her type for that, but maybe his heritage was also a factor?
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Snarky_Warden on Chapter 4 Wed 14 Sep 2016 02:33AM UTC
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