Comment on Shenlong-jun: the Heavenly Demonic Dragon

1. Xiao Yu (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sun 14 Apr 2024 02:06PM UTC

   The imagination is wonderful, I will give you that. But seriously? The amount of errors are astounding. It is not “To took physically care of,” it would be better to write it similar to:
   “To physically take care of.”
   I am not trying to be rude but, honestly your talent is very impressive, the only issue is the amount of errors. It is an interesting concept to grasp, the story you’re trying to present. It would just be easier with less noticeable error. Great work though.

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2. 1. WinterSBlack on Chapter 1 Sun 14 Apr 2024 04:45PM UTC

      

      Sorry about that, it’s my first time trying to write in a language that wasn’t mine so the phrasing order and all the mistakes came from the grammar of my mother language 🙈 I’m trying to get better

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