I AM TRYING TO GET MY THOUGHTS TO BE COHERENT AHHHHHHHHH
FIRST. THE SONG. YOU USED THE SONG I SENT YOU :333333 EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
just. the little details. Commodus taking a step back when Apollo gets mad. Then getting pissed off when Apollo laughs - could be from embarrassment, or could it be from a memory? or both? - and proceeding to DROWN HIM. like YES I HAVE BEEN PINNING FOR A FIC LIKE THIS AND ASMBEWEASJBHFHWJESAJNJ HERE IT IS
"Their position was intimate; Apollo had been under him before, but not in this way, and Commodus’s icy hatred was just as tender and passionate as his burning love. " - bottom apollo canon (or at least where Commodus is involved hehe). also KILLER LINE. I WANNA FRAME IT AND PUT IT ON MY WALL BUT MY PARENTS WOULD ASK QUESTIONS THEN. RIP ALDER
and. oh my gods. oh my gods. kathleeeeeeeeeen. u made them kiss 👀
"Commodus leaned down, his deep blue eyes as merciless as an ocean, sweeping him away into its tide-
- and kissed him, tenderly, hungrily and desperately almost as if he was the one suffocating. " - *whistles innocently* hey Commodus, you got something to tell the class?
it's almost as if despite it all he's still desperate to have Apollo to himself or something *whistles again* they are fucked up and i love them :3
IT'S OK I'M INCOHERENT TOO. I AM NOW COMPLETELY FERAL OVER THIS PAIRING.
YEAH THE FIC TITLE IS A SHOUT OUT TO YOU ❤️ ❤️
Their position was intimate; Apollo had been under him before, but not in this way, - haha yep that line was definitely my favourite too. 👀👀👀👀
bahaha they weren't going to kiss in the first draft but then I listened to the song u sent me again and "You took me down, down, down, and kissed my lips with goodbye" so I HAD TO. I HAD TO LOL.
oh yeah, there's definitely something still there between them. there's something obsessive and lustful about the way Commodus couldn't get Apollo out of his mind for two thousand years. it's like, uh, does he want to kill him or fuck him? PROBABLY BOTH. he is literally THE crazy ex of all crazy exes. and I'm living for it.
And still, I doubt this was COMPLETELY satisfying for Commodus 👀 the only thing that probably would have made it more satisfying was if Apollo was, ya know, Apollo instead of Lester but alas. Commodus can't get what he wants RIP (but also hahahahaha from us XD)
(I personally think Commodus was PISSED that Apollo didn't look like Apollo. like he's been waiting TWO THOUSAND YEARS to get REVENGE, to make Apollo SUFFER and...his ex is a normal teenager. He's probably convinced Zeus did it to spite him SPECIFICALLY lmao XD)
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