Comment on Their Touches

  1. EmeraldButterfly Fri 07 Jun 2024 06:41PM UTC

    What a unique and wonderful writing style. I love it and how descriptive it is while still keeping the story moving along. You make every moment mean something without dragging it out, and that’s something special in writing that I don’t see a lot.

    This story has a sweetness to it, but there’s also that element of longing. He’d never force her or try to do anything she doesn’t want, but more than anything he wants to hug her tight and hold her close to him.

    And the attention to detail. Some people might mistake Juno for just being cold or not caring, but he sees small signs that tell him she’s relieved to see him, glad he’s back, happy to go out to dinner with him. This is so well-done. It’s a flawless story.

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    1. Audrelite Fri 07 Jun 2024 06:50PM UTC

      Thanks so much! :-)

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