Ok, I am a Spanish speaking reader using a translator, sorry for the mistakes.
This story is amazing, I appreciate your effort in writing, it shows.
The emotional manipulation, AHHHHG, is so good, more when Paps knows and is aware that he shouldn't do or feel something but, against his will and observing all his alternatives (which are null) he must accept it (OMG, this is a war with himself). I love this psychologically focused plot (yes, a bit about analysis because I study psychology). It's beautiful that you write in these bad guys who accept being bad, I love that these do not justify themselves but explain what happens and how they, without remorse, do not seek to harm beyond what is necessary.
Please, wherever you are, I hope you think about continuing to write, it's good what you do.
Extremely late reply from me, but I'm really happy to hear you enjoy this story- I don't work on it very much and haven't been on this site lately, which is why my reply is so late, but I do come back to it now and then to write more.
Thank you for your kind words, I hope you enjoy the rest.
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