AHHHHHHHHHHH MY HEART IS IN A MILLION SHARDS! This was the most devastating thing I’ve read in ages (positive!)
God this fic is so fucking excellent- genuinely I want to write an essay about everything I loved about this chapter but I’m almost paralyzed by awe. You have got to be one of the best writers on this website. From the domestic bliss of shopping, to the sweet love that bloomed between them, to the open laughs, to the painful exchanges and words of trust, to that earth-stopping kiss that melted me… to Miles leaving and crushing Phoenix’s heart after giving him a taste of everything he ever wanted…. It’s all written masterfully! Every emotion, every bit of angst and love and fear- you can feel it all so well. The love between Phoenix and Miles and their anxieties feel so tangible! The little moments like Miles’s voice breaking, Phoenix’s subtle touches, Miles’s laugh, Miles getting Phoenix to try Panna Cotta, the look in Miles’s eyes when he looks at Phoenix… they are absolutely stunning. I am completely and hopelessly in love with this fic! I was hypnotized the whole way through reading this- and that beautiful kiss scene may be one of my favorite Wrightworth kisses of all time! I hope that one day they can have their wonton soup together. Thank you SO much for writing- I can’t wait to read more ❤️💙
(I wonder if Miles’s soul mark will be “it’d been better for everyone if you never came back from the dead”?)
Wow I keep reading this comment over and over because like, oh my god it's so nice and I'm low-key tearing up a little! I know you mentioned possibly sounding like a broken record in an earlier comment but man maybe I will be the one who sounds like one because really all that's going through my mind is "ahhhHHHHHhhhhh" (in the best way possible!) and "thank you thank you". I'm really glad you liked the kiss scene! I feel a little embarrassed saying it, but that, and the passage leading up to it, is probably one of my favorite scenes from this fic. I also promise that they will eventually indeed have wonton soup together at some point. With this fic as long as it is, there's actually a ton of callbacks to earlier bits that will happen, lol!
As for your soulmark guess - definitely very valid. Without spoiling anything, I will say that that line of Phoenix's absolutely caught my eye when I was first outlining this fic... 👀
Anyway, thank you again! I'm going to bed soon and look forward to just like... mentally cozying up to the warm and fluffy feelings this comment gave me as I fall asleep, haha! <3
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