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  1. Sunfloowers on Chapter 1 Mon 08 Jul 2024 01:30AM UTC

    AAAHHHHHSDRTGYHUIYUFTGBHUYGUFTYGVBHN This is so good!!!!!! :D

    I absolutely adore the premise and the execution so far is wonderful, I am devouring it, it has been chomped, N O M

    The first-person pov sent me for a bit of a loop, but it works very well! I think it kinda adds to the uncertainty? maybe, I'm not entirely sure, but it does give it some sort of feeling, which is really cool!

    I love shadow and your depiction of him is perfect and awesome and he's just a little gremlin!

    Thank you so much for sharing, I am so exited to see where this goes! :D

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    1. DuruDuru on Chapter 1 Mon 08 Jul 2024 09:24PM UTC

      I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT!!!! I always write in 1 person since I suck at writing in third, but I'm glad to hear that it fits this fic :) I'll try to finish the next chapter as soon as possible >:)

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