Oh my god. I'm crying. How did this go from funny haha portal time to depression. This is actual torture. This is the bad timeline. Also, the way you capture Leo's paranoia and anxiety is unmatched. It's so good my anxiety is actually shooting through the roof. A plus writing. I wish I could absorb your writing style.
Ugh I’ve been gushing over this comment, thank you so much. I want to eat it. I have eaten it in my mind. It is fuel for really giving this story my all.
The Portal series has a very unique way of going from “funny haha portal time” to “depression,” so of course I had to replicate the vibes.
This is the bad timeline. But it’s a good thing that road block hasn’t stopped the Rise turtles in the past.
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