Oh but this is so fun I'm vibrating. Evie trying to calculate and getting her brain all scrambled. Gale trying to be genuine in spite of it all. The flirting. The flirting!!! THE KISS. MY WIFE JENEVELLE. But seriously, the description of the kiss challenge is especially lovely (and the PA with the headphones made me laugh). I just love how they're pushing and pulling one another and I can't wait for more!!
I wondered if the Debord bit was too self-indulgent to include but 1) what else am I doing here if not being self-indulgent and 2) Evie leaving a conversation by declaring herself "De-bored" of it was a physical necessity. I'm so glad it's fun to read, I'm having so much fun putting them through the reality tv show paces. I understand how people get into producing and writing these shows. Thank you so much for your support and helping me when I'm totally lost in the weeds 💕
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Vashnoi on Chapter 2 Sun 18 Aug 2024 01:51AM UTC
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