Comment on Me A Princess? Yeah, Right

1. astralflames on Chapter 1 Tue 03 Sep 2024 10:51AM UTC

   

   I love this idea ! Thad, Lizzy and Uzi are such a good trio in this and I love how Khan is written.

   But I just wanted to give a heads up on the way your paragraphs are written. Whenever a different character starts talking, a new paragraph should be made to avoid confusion on who's talking. I personally found this confusing, and thought maybe you'd like to know this. /nbr /info /nf

   That aside, can't wait to see how this all turns out in future chapters ! (Despite the fact that I read this without knowing about Princess Diaries. :3)

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2. 1. Broadwayamongstotherthings on Chapter 1 Tue 03 Sep 2024 01:06PM UTC

      

      Thank you! I’ll be sure to the paragraph thing next chapter

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